Vala took a seat on one of the whitewashed benches, gazing out at the ocean that stretched far and wide before her. She seemed peaceful, yet again acting the complete opposite of her real self, or the person I had come to know. maybe there was a reason for her acting the way she does.
As to not alert her to my presence or disturb her, I sneaked around the back of the lot, and quietly took a seat next to her, staring out in front of me just as she was doing.
The girl beside me sighed. "Sir, I'm truly not in the mood for company, so please, get your butt off of the bench before I..." Her voice trailed away as she finally noticed who it was occupying the space beside her. She smirked. "Ah, Daniel, I didn't know you had a occupation as a professional stalker."
I shrugged with a smile. "I don't. I'm just worried about you."
"Don't worry," she winked at me. "I've survived worse things than this. I was fine then, and I'll be fine now."
"Really?" I was interested in this comment. Was she finally ready to confess to me what had happened in her past? "Do you...wanna talk about it, perhaps?"
She absentmindedly scratched her neck, looking as if she were fighting a battle inside her mind. I wouldn't have placed bets on who was winning, but I sure hoped that it would be her.
"You asked for it, I guess..." She took a deep breath, and relaxed against the back of the bench. "The whole truth then. I never knew my real father. Apparently he disappeared around the time of my birth. Problems with smuggling he was involved in. Because of that, my mom remarried to take care of me, and I at least had a father figure. A crappy one, though. When I was a little girl, my step dad left us as well. He was no good to us anyhow. An alcoholic through and through. He...drank so much he sometimes became aggressive, beating my mom and I. My mom even landed in the hospital once, but she never ratted him out to the authorities. She still loved him. It was a stupid love to have, because he didn't return it."
"She hoped that he would change, didn't she?"
"Most likely. In any case, he never did. He left us for days at a time, but always returned. One time he stayed away for longer than usual, and we knew... The police told us they found him and his car at the bottom of a cliff. My mother was heartbroken, of course. She died a year later, but not from a broken spirit. She had damage to her skull which was slowly killing her, and one day she just didn't wake up. Of course, she did have a handful of pills that night, so it could have been a number of things. I didn't really stick around to find out. God, I was so afraid that they would put me in foster care. I didn't want to live like that at all. And so, I ran. When I was eight years old, I took to the streets, taking care of myself, making friends and enemies along the way." |
That last paragraph or so made the entire post for me. It was fabulous.
ReplyDeleteNot forgetting that the REST of the post was wonderful. Yay for posts!
-Skye
This post was one of my favorites to write, especially the last paragraph. I'm finally getting used to the humor I wanted Vala to display, so it's getting easier to write this generation.
DeleteThank you so much for commenting, Skye! :)
She killed him :D
ReplyDeleteAww! <3 I really hope (and pray) Vala and Danny boy get together :)
Great chapter Destiny, very well written. And by the way I did read your last post but forgot to comment,sorry!
Who killed who? O.o Vala just knocked the guy unconscious...dunno what you're referring to. If you're thinking of her partner in crime, someone else knocked him over...
DeleteMwahahaha... We shall have to see about that. I'm in a very evil mood today(obviously, because I never laugh like that <.<), so anything can happen. :D
Thanks so much, and don't worry, that's alright!
Sorry I meant injured him *facepalm*
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I <3 Rock, Paper, Scissors, Lizard, Spock. ;D
ReplyDeleteDaniel is such a genetleman. I love how he didn't want to look at Vala. That made me laugh so hard. And goodness, I didn't realize Vala was such a charmer. That poor guard didn't know what hit him.
It's nice to finally know Vala's life story, which is quite sad. But oh my goodness, I love her. She's the totally opposite of me.
Truthfully, I think Daniel is A LOT like me. Almost like the boy version of me. O_O
Anywho, awesome chapter, Destiny! Eeep, I want them to get together!! :D
~Calista Smith
Hehehehe, glad someone caught that reference to The Big Bang Theory. :)
DeleteAh, yes, she's had experience in that regard, and well, she's not too sore for the eyes, so she gets by. When you've had a tough life like hers, it tends to help to learn that skill.
We're in the same boat, then! I sometimes see things of myself in Daniel, which ends up freaking me out.
Thanks for commenting, Molly. :D
Eeeehehehe Vala is awesome xD
ReplyDeleteThey'd better get together soon....
More like....now! :D
GREAT chapter! <3
~Izzi
She sure is, and I'll work hard to try and get them to be together (there's another spouse possibility for him, so I'm currently torn).
DeleteThank you, my dear, for commenting! I miss hearing from you...we should chat...but the WHEN is always a problem. :/
~♥~
I love the last line. So funny.
ReplyDeleteAlso Darcy's style is gatting...calmer. Is she going to go back to her older, much wackier style?
Where are they, by the way? And is Jack going to become friendly again?
Gah! So many questions!
Well that's just because when I'm interested in a story I want to know more and more!
Really good chapter!
Fawnester
A part of her |wacky" style is that it is unpredictable, so she could switch to many styles. In this post, it was more formal, but she will get to a point where she'll be dressing a lot more crazier than usual.
DeleteThey were downtown Bridgeport. And...yes, I believe so.
Any questions you have, I will be glad to answer. ^_^ Thank you for commenting!
Oops, I though I commented on this chapter, but no. Vala, you remind me of my little sis. Kinda all "go after what you want" -ish. So.... I am thinking about starting a blog myself. Is it time-consuming? And is blogspot free? Do you have any tips? I know this seems like a lot of questions, but I've been considering writing a blog sice gen. 3 ended. If you go onto the sims 3 website, ( the one that's one the launcher) you can find me as icepricesdude. There's a picture on my blog there of the main character if I did the blog.
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Oh, if anyone has tips or helpful hints, or anything about me starting a blog, PLEASE COMENT!!!
Yes, blogspot is free. It can be time-consuming, or not depends how much you put into it, just like with everything else.
DeleteMy biggest tip is to make another folder in your Electronic Arts folder entitled something like "My legacy pictures" or whatever. Then after you finish taking the pictures you need for each chapter sort out the ones you are actually going to publish into the blog into the new folder.
Also plan the basic concept for the chapter, before you start with the pics. And then have a writing program up and write the chapter out while you take the pictures, not before(Unless you have a super close idea of what you want)It's just easier to get a picture really close to what you want and then mold your words around it. Besides your sims might happen to strike a really awesome pose you weren't expecting that you want to incorperate into your writing.
I hope this helped a ton and a half! (Btw, I actually did have a legacy up that crashed so it's not like I'm trying to give you advice avout something I haven't done)
Best of luck!
Fawnester
Blogspot is always free, but there is something that could be a little tricky. As with all blogging sites, there's a stage where your limit for uploading pictures will be reached, and you're gonna have to pay to continue using Picasa (free choice, of course). That's why I use Photobucket and insert pictures the looooooooooooong and arduous way.
DeleteWhat Fawnester said is all true - taking pictures beforehand is crucial, as it really helps with the writing aspect. I'll give my full two cents tomorrow morning, when I'm not exhausted and writing like a zombie!
Oh my Cheez-it's thank you!!! If I do start a blog, I'll tell you all what's its called and all that good stuff. : D
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I have officially started a blog at. al-mazingsims.blogspot. Feel free to cruise on over there and leave comments and tips. And how does photobucket work???
Delete-al
okay, so how did you get the banners to look so great? mine's... well... not as good.
Delete-Al
Photobucket is pretty easy to work. Just register and it should be a breeze from there (usually... O_o). It's pretty user friendly, or that's how I experienced it.
DeleteThat...is years of practicing with GIMP. I'm never going to be a photoshop pro, but when you fiddle around with editing software, you can recognize what edits would be acceptable, or when you're overdoing it. THAT's the main thing with editing. NEVER overdo it - like with sharpening. Too much and it's...*shudder* It's hideous.
You could try googling some tutorials, to get a basic knowledge of the software you use. It REALLY helps to broaden your mind. ^_^
PS: Could you perhaps add a following gadget (found on your design tab) to your blog? I'd like to kept up to date with each new post.
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