"So sad that we won't be able to use the piano...," my hand reached out to caress the sleek, black surface. It must have cost thousands of dollars, and yet, no one really appreciates the music that it could make. Only the value and the stature that it implies.
"Speak for yourself," Vala elbowed me out of the way, gallantly taking a seat behind the piano. After cracking her knuckles, she set out to let her fingers play over the ivory keys.
What I heard coming out of that instrument shocked me to the core.
Vala was like a professional concert pianist. She had the poise, and most importantly, the skill. The music sounded just like that I would hear in operas. For all her weird antics and seductive character, she was actually more than just a pretty face.
"This...What...How?" flabbergasted, I could hardly form a coherent sentence. She literally took my breath away.
"When you're an actress, it helps to learn things like this to sweep men of their feet," she winked at me, bringing the tune to an end. "I was in Paris when I was twenty, and had to seduce this really cute artist... 'Course, he liked people with character, apparently. The people I worked for gave me lots of money, but no instruction on just how to get some of this 'character'. I saw an advertisement in a magazine once, and that led to me attending piano classes. I'm a fast learner, so naturally, I can play as well as anyone in an orchestra." |
It was so nice to see all the family back together again, still looking young as ever!!
ReplyDeleteVala & Daniel are just to perfect together! I see babies in the future ^_^
Great Reunion & a fantastic chapter :)
Haha, but of course! That factor won't be changing anytime soon, unless there's some kind of unforeseen side effect of the potion...which there won't be. ^_^
DeleteNot in the near future, but...yes, there will be! Thank you so much, Kurtis.
Richard!!!! Amelia!!!! Kaylin!!!! *Dances around in excitment* Oh my Gosh, family reunion!!!!! unfortunaly, no Aaron...but still FANTASTIC!!!!
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Oh, and I finally got my blog started... Please check it out & leave a comment. I want to know people's opinions.
DeleteEEP, I know! I'm so sorry for not including him, but there were so many characters I had to manage, and it was becoming a pain... i'll try to sneak him in somewhere else. :)
DeleteThank you, and I did check out your blog. Would you mind adding a follower gadget so I could be up to date with the latest posts? I would love to keep reading your story!
Yes, I will try to figure out how to do that.
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Eeepp!!! *fangirls* RICHARD! I miss him so much. I had forgotten how adorable he is.
ReplyDeleteEhem... anyway... Vala, she continues to crack me up. I wish I could be as witty and somehow charming as she is. Arg, the ending. I was seriously hoping they'd get together, if you know what I mean. ;) I suppose I can wait.
I thought it was funny that Vala knew about the youth potion thingy (or the fountain of youth, as she called it).
I can't wait for the next chapter, Destiny!
Oh, and I was wondering, could I do the young forever potion thingy with my heirs and heiresses too? I really don't want Calista (or Adam) to die and I really like your solution to it, so I hope you don't mind that I'm want to copy the idea.
~Calista Smith
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DeleteDon't worry, there's still plenty of time for him to still look adorable. There can be opportunities like the one in this post that might include him.
DeleteI don't think one would easily find a character such as her in real life...so she's a bit unrealistic, I guess. *psst* You won't have to wait too long... ;)
Oh, sure, have at it! I know exactly how you feel. ^_^ Thank you for commenting, Molly! :D
Crap, forgot to explain the thing about the potion...she doesn't know about it, which is why she referenced the Fountain of Youth - it's her unique way of explaining the situation. The organization she worked for strive for many thing, especially something that could make them live forever, which is why they take any myth surrounding youth seriously.
DeleteTHAT's why I used that term. ^_^
The more I read about Vala, the more I realize how interesting she must be to write.
ReplyDeleteHow old is Vala in comparison to Daniel, anyway? XD No, but really. How old are those two?
It's really amazing how you manage to make every chapter better than the last.
I'm super excited to read more!
Fawnester
Oh, she is. To be honest, it can be REALLY frustrating, as I'm not used to write like that, and because she's almost the opposite of me.
DeleteVala is two years younger than Daniel. Now, you'll have to forgive me if the following will be misinformation, but much of my planning has left my mind... I intended Daniel to start his generation at age 24, and as 2 years have passed already, that would make him 26, which puts Vala at 24. I actually intended her to be older, but couldn't get myself to write that. She's just so pretty. *_*
Thanks for commenting, Fawnester! :)
I think Daniel is slowly falling for this chick! <3
ReplyDeleteThey'll make a cute couple and have beautiful babies. :3
great Chapter! :D
~Hailey~
(aka Dawn)