"I guess I deserved that...," he mumbles. "Look, please, you have to understand. Last night wasn't a good night for me. I lost a pal of mine in a car crash, and wasn't taking it well... Some other friends took me out and got me really drunk. I'm sorry if I did something crazy, or something that offended you, but I wasn't in the right sense of my mind."
His story causes me to falter, and I have nothing to say in response. I was definitely not prepared for such a heartfelt apology.
"Uh, um, alright... I'm sorry about slapping you like that, but I really was angered by what you did, and it was my first day in a new town yesterday," I shrug.
"Hey, no biggie. By the way, what exactly did I do last night?"
I snort. "You hit on me, and suggested we do some crazy things."
Aaron smacks his own face, and I feel terrible for having said that. "God dammit, I'm gonna kill Ricky for getting me drunk... Really, really, please accept my apology, uh... What's your name again?"
"It's Kaylin, and your Aaron, right? Nice to meet you...again." |
Great Great Great Chapter, Kaylin.
ReplyDeleteI really loved it and Bridgit WOW she get's around allot!!
Anyway Great chapter and WELL written, did you read mine?
Thanks so much, Kurtis. I put a bit of extra thought into writing this chapter. :D
DeleteYup, she's a crazy chick, that girl! And yes, I did read your latest chapter, and I've commented. :)
Thanks and Lolz, Thanks for commenting on mine too, I replied to it I think you should read it is a sneak peak of The future of Riley!
DeleteWooooooh I like Charlie better :D He looks just like my neighbor, and they have the same name! And my neighbor is an actor :)
ReplyDeleteBRIDGET YOU'RE GETTING ON HER BAD SIDE. :P
I knew you'd like Charlie better... >.> Especially after what Aaron did!
DeleteThat is one big coincidence... O_o Just so you know, I'm not spying on your neighborhood. *whistles*
The first rule of Kaylin: NEVER EVER get on her bad side. You'll get to see how she explodes in the next chapter. :) Thanks for commenting, Izzi!
Oh Bridget. D: She's got some explaining to do. Heh heh.
ReplyDeleteI can't wait to see if Kaylin gets together with Charlie, Aaron, or neither of them. Ooh, it's getting so tense! I can't wait for the next chapter. Wonderful as always Des!
~Calista Smith
Yup, she does! But I don't there much to explain - She was caught in action.
DeleteYou'll just have to wait and see for the next chapters to come out! For once, I'm gonna keep my mouth shut about all of this.
Thank youuuu for your comment, Calista. <3
Oooh, I love the side characters! I hope Janelle, Charlie, and Aaron will be central characters! And what are we going to do about Bridget? I think at least get another bed...LOL
ReplyDeleteExcellent as always!
Hahahaha, if only there was more room for her in the apartment, I would get Bridget a bed!
DeleteI'm hoping to feature them more and more as time goes by, so I guess your hoping will become a reality!
Thank you so much, Cassie. :)
Wow this is great!
ReplyDeleteNaughty, naughty Bridget. She needs a job...or something to keep her out of the house!
I actually feel sorry for Aaron...I'm not sure if I like Charlie or Aaron better....I'll just have to see how all this plays out!
Really excited for next chapter!
Fawnester
Thank you! <3
DeleteThankfully, she will be getting a job soon, so she won't be up to trouble for long. :)
The dispute between the guys is a major story line in this generation (not like Twilight, goodness no), so you will have to keep reading to find out which one is better.
great post. bridget is getting sneakier and sneakier as the posts go bye.
ReplyDeleteThanks! Yup, she definitely is. :)
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