The best psychology sessions sometimes took place when you spoke to strangers. They, at least, didn't judge you, or say things that you wanted to hear because you were paying them. It wouldn't have hurt to tell the girl why I moved out. "My girlfriend died... I, uh, couldn't cope with it, and moved back home."
"I'm so sorry...," she bit her lip, frowning. I had put her in yet another awkward situation. How I had ever landed a girlfriend in the first place was beyond me. "How did it happen?"
"There was an attempted robbery at the art gallery four years ago, but when the robber found out there was nothing of value, he shot her and ran. The guy was caught eventually, and got the death penalty, but it...it doesn't make things any easier. And now I just unloaded my entire sob story on you, while you probably didn't even want to hear any of it. I'm such an idiot, sorry."
"That's fine," she laughed. "You seem like a decent guy. I really hope things work out for you in the end."
"I do too," I almost said, but the sound of her phone ringing stopped me. She waved goodbye, headed towards the elevator, and answered her phone.
It only dawned on me a minute later that I never learned her name. |
O_O Wow, that was awesome!!! And you're right, Vala is gorgeous! *o*
ReplyDeleteGoodness, poor Daniel seems to find himself in the most dangerous of situations. If I were him, I wouldn't have been able to go back to the museum at all.
I love the action in this story! Can't wait for Chapter 4!
~Calista Smith
Well shucks, thank you, Molly! :D
DeleteYeah... Maybe he shouldn't have listened to Jack. Indirectly, he's gotten him into a heap of trouble and danger.
There will definitely be more to come, hehe.
Oh. My. Gosh.
ReplyDeleteI thought that the chick he met was going to be really, really sweet, but now I find her a bit scary. xD
I can't wait to see how things play out with her.
Appearances can be deceiving. That, and she's a wonderful actress...scratch that, she's sort of a pathological liar. xD
DeleteThanks for commenting, Laura!
Interesting.
ReplyDeleteDaniel is just always in the wrong places at the wrong times!
I loved meeting the new characters in this story, Especially Vala!
Great chapter Destiny. This may be weird but I can see Daniel marrying her....
His entire family has that luck, unfortunately.
DeleteThere's still a character that has yet to be introduced. She won't have the entrance Vala has, though.
Thanks. It's quite hard for me to picture them together (even though I'd love for them to be a couple), seeing as their personalities will be clashing a lot. But, Daniel will be the only one that trusts her in certain situations, and that's gonna have a lot of influence in the story line, and what happens in the end.
I have a great idea Daniel. Stay away from Paris. People like to point guns at you there, or find out your life stories, or aparently, both. :)
ReplyDeleteI like the way Vala looks. I would have commented on it earlier but you can't comment on bios. I think I like the look so much because she looks a lot like a charactor from a book I've been writing for a year or so.
Plus her character is rather...interesting.
I'm just a little confused as to why she has a little blonde in her hair as a robber, but not in the apartment.
Wow there are soo many ways I could see this going...I can't waut to learn more.
Fawnester
That is fantastic advice. Now, if only he would heed it...!
DeleteYeah, I disabled comments on those... I dunno why, TBH.
You're writing a book? Holy Hannah, that's fantastic.
That is gonna be one of her important features for a while. The character that I'm basing her off of had that highlight for a while. The reason for it is probably gonna be pretty stupid, something like she wanted to mix her hair up or whatever (still need to work that out), but yeah, hopefully it'll work out.
Thanks for commenting, Fawnester (I feel so weird saying that... I'm used to writing people's names, instead of a username)!
Thank you. I'm almost done with the first draft and I'm really excited to finally get the whole story out on paper, even if it is totally different by the end.
ReplyDeleteJust pretend Fawnester is my name lol. I'd give you my real one, but I use the username for so much stuff...I wouldn't feel comfortable having them linked if that makes sense
Fawnester