After a long ride back at the boarding house, Darcy had offered to cook us dinner, while Mitchell and Samantha, both people I still had to get to know better, kept a eye on Vala before we would take her to the police station.
"Hey there, mister Macho. So, how was it, punching a girl in the face? And might I confess, quite a pretty one."
"Oh, come on, Jack. You can see the poor guy is distraught," Darcy chuckled, closing the fridge and bringing out a bottle of Coca-Cola.
"Yeah... Not something I want to do, ever again. If I ever encounter a girl fight, I'd rather leave them to fight it out than step in and get hit by one, or being forced to hit one."
"You're saying you never brawled with Darcy?" Jack frowned.
"Well... She packed the punches. I just ran away. Cowardly, maybe, but our mom prohibited me from ever defending myself, I swear. She kept prattling on about how I was stronger than Darcy, and I could hurt her a lot more than she could hurt me. Sounds like a lie to me now that I think about it."
"Lies are something that you shouldn't be worried about now," Darcy was as pale as vampires are supposed to be in the myths. "Guys... Mitchell should have been down here by now. He said he would swap out with one of us, and he was pretty impatient... I think something is wrong."
She had no idea just how right she was. |
I honestly think this is the most descriptive blog I have ever read. I've probably said that before but I just need to remind you at times.
ReplyDeleteI noticed Vala like the sight of Daniel's butt ^_^
I actually feel sorry for Vala, she seemed to have such a terrible past.
I loved the whole adventure of them two when they were down in the the tunnels, they got to know each other more.
The best part that I loved was when Daniel smirked at Vala and said, ''Your Busted.'' That and the same part where Darcy, Mitchell, Casey and Jack were standing from a far looking at Vala. That part just made me think in my head, Who you gonna call, GHOST BUSTERS!''
Anyway enough of my ranting, Great chapter Destiny!! :D
First one to comment ^_^
DeleteThanks for that. I do try hard to be descriptive, but I'm more of a narrative writer, so it's hard for me to combine those two fully.
DeleteHehe, she sure does.
You do know that she made that part up, right? Hmm...seems like I didn't make that clear enough in the post.
Vala Vala Vala... you're so lucky I still like you. Especially after all that you've done. >.<
ReplyDeletePoor Daniel. I totally wasn't expecting that punch he threw at Vala... nor did I expect her to escape. But I should have expected it because it was the unexpected.
Kurtis is right, your writing is very descriptive in such a short way. You don't have to create monster paragraphs just to describe a scene. It's amazing. *_*
As you always say on my blog, I really love the emotions that the character show in each picture. You pictures are, as always, amazing. ^_^
~Calista Smith
It seems it'll be impossible to make you dislike her. O.o I'll have to put the dastardly ideas aside then!
DeleteExpect the unexpected...yeah...clichéd, but true. ^_^
You're just...too kind. I'm really giving it my best (at times, sometimes I doze off...>.>), but it still lacks so much. Maybe I should go study to become a writer after school, and then it would improve. Meh, we'll never know, I guess. I still don't have a clue what job to take up after school.
Thanks for commenting, Molly, and have a great day! :)