I should have known better than trust the word of a criminal.
The mistake was all mine, in the end. I tried to take advantage of her supposed soft-heartedness and made a move to escape, which ended in me having my back flat against the ground, hardly able to move. There was also the subject of her being a woman. I had always been taught not to raise my hand against one, but at that very moment, every part of me wanted to break that rule.
"Just kill me already. It won't help for you to torture me. I have nothing to say," raising my head slightly, I coughed the words out, almost expecting blood to stain my shirt. Surprisingly enough, it didn't.
"Oh, that's not what I was going for... I actually need your help," I could see her grinning as she maneuvered around me. "You see, I found out that you're an archaeologist...someone that finds riches in dangerous parts of the world. My organization needs more riches, so you're going to help me found one in particular, which happens to be here in France. A very sacred artifact, apparently."
"Correction: Archaeologists do dig out historical artifacts, but they don't always have a lot of value, and most of all, I'm not one to go into dangerous places."
"That's all about to change, mister... I'm sorry, I never did catch your name?"
"Daniel Jackson... Doctor Jackson, actually."
"Ah, so you're a clever one. Fantastic," edged with her English accent, the word sounded even more sarcastic than it was intended. |
1st comment!!! Wow. Great few chapters so far. I'm incredibly curious about what's gonna happen next. Yeah Darcy!!! I don't like jack that much, either. Vala, please stay black-haired. You look a bit odd blonde.
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Thanks!
DeleteIt might take a while for the next post to surface... I've sort of hit a wall when it comes to writing.
Your wish will most likely be granted, hehe. Vala just looks better with her natural hair color.
Oh crap, I hope Daniel doesn't get into even more trouble because I can see it going even worse.
ReplyDeleteI was cool to finally meet Samantha (I saw her in the character bios). She seems like a very strong girl, a bit like Darcy too!!
Darcy is actually such a great sister to Daniel, he is sure lucky to have one (I would really like to have a sister in RL but I have two brothers.)
Anyway enough of my ranting, Great chapter Destiny!
Oh, yes, much much worse. Luckily no one is going to to die, so, not too bad, when you look at it like that!
DeleteThat's why they're gonna get along really well.
Trust me, sisters are a hassle. I have an older one, and she's just...hell on earth.
Thank you!
Eep, SAM is here! :D I loved the scene with Darcy and Jack. Poor guy, though he really needs to stop smoking. :\
ReplyDeleteYour poses turned out beautiful, Destiny! They really added more to the story!
And I love Vala even more. Even though I'd totally hate her in real life, I love her in this story.
It's a good thing Mitchell decided to do something about Daniel situation. I was wondering what happened to him. Gah, awesome chapter, Destiny!
~Calista Smith
*Daniel's
DeleteShucks, thank you so much, Molly. :) Yeah, he does. Hopefully when he starts his training he'll get into better shape!
DeleteSo far you're like, the only one that likes her. I would too. I think I know some people like that, actually...
I nearly forgot about him actually. *coughs* It's hard keeping track of so many characters and trying to write them into a post!
Yay! More Darcy!
ReplyDeleteHow sweet of Jack. What a terrible position to be put in, especially considering Jack hasn't really worked before.
Still he makes me feel sorry for Darcy, having to put up with him on her own and then finding out her brother is in trouble, after he decided on a whim to go to Paris.
As always, I can't wait to see what will happen next.
Awesome chapter
Fawnester
Certainly. I'm gonna keep her as a main character, I believe. :D
DeleteShe'll end up blaming Jack for everything, seeing as he did suggest that Daniel go to Paris (on his own >.>), so yeah...not the best life to lead.
Thanks, Fawnester!
~♥~
I was reading through the other posts and your replies, and you said you hit a wall. Is it that you don't know where to take the story, or you don't know how to say what you want to say? If the problem is that you don't know where to take the story, I have a suggestion, but I figure that you pretty much have this generation planned out, right?
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Oh I meant to also ask if you were planning on getting Sunlit Tides?
DeleteFawnester
It's a little bit of both, I guess. I haven't had time to let my mind wander and think of what to do next. I just haven't been in the mood to write anything. :/ I would welcome suggestions, but I'd feel really guilty if I never ended up using it... :(
DeleteDefinitely (though WHERE I'll get money for it is a mystery! I still need to pre-order Supernatural AND Seasons). :D
My idea is fairly simple. Vera takes Daniel to her apartment to hold him hostage for about a week before some higher-ups are supposed to arrive, to provide more manpower to force Daniel to find the artifact.
DeleteMeanwhile Darcy, Max, Mitchell, and Samantha are trying find him and Vera, around France.
I totally understand if you don't use this, so don't feel guilty. After all it's your story, But I thought I'd throw it out there.
Fawnester
Sorry I didn't realize until later I had writen Vera instead of Vala. Not sure where Vera came from.
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