"Mom? You're not making any sense. Could you please tell me why you just freaked out?" I asked, sounding like a dumb five-year-old.
It took a while before my mom regained her normal voice, or any voice at all. Deep breaths sounded in the phone. "Kaylin, that man is dangerous. His entire family is, to be exact."
"MOM! That still doesn't explain to me how you know him. Please, explain it, or I will drive all the way over there and force it out of you two."
"Listen...," In that one ominous word, I knew that this tale did not have a happy ending, and that I definitely should focus all my attention on this explanation. "Dwayne and I met after I broke up with my boyfriend Chad. We ended up dating for a long time. He even bought me a dog. While we were dating, he told me about his life in Bridgeport, about his family... Most of them were vampires. Of course, I accepted that, because I loved him. But then, I met his mother, and she almost killed me. Dwayne left me with the promise that he'll fix his family, and that he'll come back to me. The thing was, I couldn't wait for him. I couldn't love someone that put me in danger. All I had was a promise, and I wasn't going to be pathetic like those characters in the stories that believed in that promise. I didn't want supernatural elements in my life... Then I met your father, and everything became perfect. I found my soul mate. So in a sense, I should thank Dwayne, but I can't, because he came back and said we could get back together. He was gone for years, and he just expected I was going to take him back! I had you with me that day, when he and I met again, and the sight of all of it sent him over the edge. He bothered us for quite a while, but luckily... It's all in the past. We moved on, and we're happy. But he wasn't, I guess." |
WOW ''That bitch is crazy.'' That line made me laugh. What a great great chapter I just loved it. Very well written and put together, great as usual Destiny :)
ReplyDeleteAnd as for Dwayne, go to hell!
Aw, it's good to know I created a bit of laughter for you. :) Thank you SO very much for your kind words and comment!
DeleteNo Problem Dessie :)
Deleteomg! dwayne and jenna working together..... LOL i still cant believe that jenna is in love with (and drugging) her own brother...
ReplyDeleteThey're not working together, but it'd be incredibly crazy if they did. O.o It's usually the quiet ones that go crazy. ^_^ Thanks for commenting!
DeleteAwesome!!! I love the Mickey mouse shirt kaylin was wearing. And when destiny yelled "that bastard" when kaylin told her who Aaron's uncle was, I nearly died of laughter. Who knew two words could be so perfectly descriptive???
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That's actually my favorite dress for the Sims. :D Hahaha, I'm smiling, knowing that I actually succeeded in adding humor to a post. Thank you, for taking the time to comment. :D
DeleteWow great post! And I agree with ENTELLIGENT, that "That bitch is crazy" line was hilarious. I cannot believe that anyone would be in love with their own sibling, that's just gross. Poor Charlie, his sister drugging him and all, he deserves to be free not locked like that bitch should be. -_- This was a fun post to read and I can't wait to read more. :)
ReplyDelete~Dawn Turner aka Hailey
EEK, DAWN! YOU'RE COMMENTING! On my blog... I feel so honored right now. :O I'd just like to take the time to explain that very twisted idea...
DeleteI got it from Assassin's Creed: Brotherhood, where Lucrezia Borgia is actually in love and (french) kisses her own brother... I didn't take it that far, thank goodness, but it served as inspiration.
Thanks so so much for taking the time to comment, Dawn, and I'll be sure to be commenting on your blog from now on.
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DeleteI am in LOVE with this storyline and everything in general. I can't wait to see the outcome of Jenna and Charlie (though, tecnically, Charlie did wound those people. so he should still be charged in his sentence... Will he be a jailbird still or will he get out? IDK...).
ReplyDeleteAw, thank you so much! It really means a lot to me, hearing that. Charlie will be charged, but his lawyers would possibly suggest pleading mentally insane, so he can go to a hospital and receive treatment. He might actually get off a bit lighter, seeing as his sister will be serving that sentence. I dunno, I'm actually still working out the kinks. O.o
DeleteThanks for commenting!
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Yay! The Raven is caught! :D Phew, now I don't have to worry or try to figure out who the Raven is anymore.... ^_^
ReplyDeleteGreat chapter! :DDDDDD
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~Izzi
Glad to put your mind at ease, hehe! Thanks, Izzi. :D
DeleteOh my gosh, I was not expecting that.
ReplyDeleteWonderful story Destiny! Like Izzi, I'm so happy we found out who the Raven was. Haha, brings me back to when I was doing all that guessing... I never would have guessed Charlie. Nor his sister as the mastermind behind the Raven.
~Calista Smith
I told you guys you wouldn't be able to figure it out... 'Course, at that time I had an entirely different story line in my head, which I had to change because I wasn't happy with it.
DeleteThanks Molly, for taking the time to comment. ;)
Charlie's sister has a few issues. O.o
ReplyDeleteJust a few.
I definitely was not expecting that!
Oh, and Janelle is a bad ass, just saying. :)
Yup, of course, just a few. They're so minor it's almost unnoticeable. ^_^ Hahaha.
DeleteJanelle is definitely so, I agree. :D Thanks, Amanda!
One word to describe Jenna- Creeper! Srsly, wat a crazy lady.
ReplyDeleteCrazy, indeed. I'm good at creating such characters. Perhaps I'm crazy then... O.o
DeleteThanks for commenting!