Of course, I never expected that I would be a victim while hidden away. The hand came out of nowhere, but suddenly, a large hand clasped itself over my mouth, stopping me from reacting with fright. The fright wasn't so much because of his hand, but more so because of the color. It was almost the same as mine. The person was a human.
"Don't move," the person whispered into my ear. A male voice. "Don't do anything stupid. It will cost you greatly. I'm here to save you, but it will take time, as we must do so you in secret. In exchange, we need your help. We've have been monitoring the aliens who hold you captive, and they may have vital information we need. So you think you would be able to get it for us?"
Yup, never expected anything like that.
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Alright, so this post probably stirs up a LOT more questions than answering them.
It will all unravel in due time...just bear with me, and this story.
I'm super surprised to have another chapter out, because yesterday, I had been experiencing writer's block...it didn't last long.
So yeah, thanks for reading, and have a really really awesome day.
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FIRST COMMENT! ....maybe, if I hurry :) But I'll take my time to write a meaningful comment for you....
ReplyDeleteOMG THAT WAS AWESOME!! :D (so much for meaningful, huh?) Anyway, I love this story line :D I can honestly say that I have NEVER read a sims legacy that had anything as complicated (Well, Berry had a pretty complicated story line, but still) and with ALIENS :D This is sooo cool :D I just wanna read more and more and moreeeeee
Wow. That was long. Anyway....it'll be hard for COUGHyouknowwhoCOUGH to copy this is any way whatsoever, and if he/she does, then you'll know right away cause I can honestly say NO ONE has a storyline like this :)
THIS IS REALLY LONG AND I SHOULD STOP TYPING.
~Izzi
AWESOME IS MEANINGFUL! IT'S A GREAT WORD! I CAN'T STOP USING IT TO DESCRIBE THINGS!
DeleteThank you so so soooooooooooooooooooooo much for saying that. For a writer, that means so much. I could cry, but I haven't had breakfast yet, so that's a no. Crying on a empty stomach...sheesh.
It definitely will be. The added benefit is that anyone can recognize it as copying instantly. Not just the aliens part, but the dreaming and shiz like that.
I LOVE YOU FOR TYPING SO MUCH.
Actually most of my questions were answered in this chapter. I really like the way this chapter was written out and from what I saw of the twins, there cute.
ReplyDeleteI really really really do not like Copper. I really dislike him considering he's a pixel. I agree with Truffle, I have never read a legacy as complicated as yours, but in a good way of course. This is honestly my favourite legacy of ALL time. Seriously. And the only question I have is who the hell is that man in the end picture? Imagine if it was Uncle Keegan! That would be seriously unexpected.
Anyway, AMAZING chapter Destiny :D
it be really freaky if it was uncle keegan. evil Keegan would be totally scary too.
DeleteThey were? Mi scusi, I didn't realize that. O_O Oh, they're not actually twins. Daniel is older than Darcy by about a year. I'll elaborate on that later on.
DeleteYeah...I blame my imagination for that. I keep having these weird ideas, and they're hard to accomplish, but I try to make them work, which is why they end up like this.
Sorry, but I can't tell you that. But I CAN tell you that it's not Keegan. I've decided he won't be making a comeback.
Thanks for commenting, Kurtis!
No problem :D
DeleteWhoa...
ReplyDeleteI hope that was her real family, and she just lost her memory. Cus they are soo sweet! Although then there could a be a weird twin thing going on here...
If I had to answer this comment in full, I would probably have to reveal the whole story line to you. O_O
DeleteSo I'll just say...that was her real family, and she's having trouble recollecting certain things about her real life.
Thanks for commenting!
Gah!!! Another cliffhanger. Is that her real life that she was remembering, or the future from after she's returned to earth??? Oh, and the twins are SO cute. Dotheyhave a character bio??? I'll check after this post. Great job, and ow I have more questions. XD
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Firstly, the kids don't have a bio...yet. I'll add it later on when they're older/when I have time to take pictures.
DeleteGod, it seems I'm gonna admit to everything... That's her real life she was remembering. Other than that, my lips are sealed.
Hopefully I'll be able to answer them in the upcoming chapters. Thanks for commenting!
Ooh, okay. I keep reloading this page every hour just to see if anything else is posted. I've probably read the other chapters a million times. And to quote entelligent, you DO have the best legacy.
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You're in luck - I might have a chapter posted by the end of the night, if my internet isn't gonna be a pain in the butt and give up on me.
DeleteOh, I wish! You should check out the Wells legacy - now THAT is a fantastic story, perfectly written and very realistic.
Oh goodness, Amelia forgot all of her memories? Perhaps I should have expected that but that's such a serious situation, to forget your family like that! And she has two kids!?!?!? I wonder how they're doing, missing their mother like that. Poor kids.... I think I might understand this "love triangle" thingy a bit more, if there is one, that is. Gah, I'm blabbering.
ReplyDeleteOoh, I was not expecting that ending. :O
Eep, can't wait for the next post!
~Calista Smith
Hmm mm. She kind of blocked most of her memories after what's happened, and because of another accident...and that led to her having no recollection of her past life.
DeleteThere might be a love triangle. It'll start happening in the next post.
Crap. I've said too much. I just can't shut up when I'm talking to you. >.<
Anywho, thanks for commenting, Molly. :D
Well as always I don't have the attention span for a long comment, but I have reloaded this probably 20 times just today hoping you updated. That shows how much I love this story lol.
ReplyDeleteOh my gosh... Okay, I'm gonna cry. Having a reader like you makes everything so much more worth it.
DeleteBecause of this, I'll load my game up in a minute and start cranking at taking pics for the next chapter. :D
I done the same thing yesterday but I didn't mention it. Seriously you have the BEST legacy Dessie.
DeleteNo! That sounds a lot like the guy wants to hurt Chambrey!!!
ReplyDeleteAwww, Poor Lia. Actually I sorta feel more sorry for her husband and kids who she forgot she was related to. That would be terrible!
I'm really glad you are starting on the next chappie already!
Fawnester