"Mr Jackson..." the doctor sighed yet again. "I'm afraid of the possibility that she might not be able to keep herself alive if she remains here. She might need help breathing at times, receive feeding and the clearing of bowels. Though she might not like hospitals, you need to take that in consideration."
"I am... Isn't there some way for you to bring some equipment here? Please, doctor. I would pay extra if you do indeed help her here."
"I'm not after the money, Richard. I only care about her health... That's what doctors do. And seeing that Amelia needs help, and I can't give it to her... It hurts me inside to see a patient like this."
"Please, doctor..."
Head hanging low, the doctor gave a small nod. "I'll see what I can do, what I can bring to your home. Find a room that we can set everything up in, then we'll move her there. Just be careful when doing so. I'm afraid what it could do in her current state."
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Extremely short, stupid, first chapter. I could kick myself.
I know this is not what people were expecting... But it's just an idea that I've always wanted to try out. Hopefully you guys now understand the caption that's on the banner.
This is probably not up to standard, but seeing as I've been distracted by guests in our house (it's my birthday, and apparently we have to celebrate it -_-)... Yeah. They probably sucked out my inspiration for the day.
Thanks for reading, and have a good day!
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I didn't know what to expect but now I do. AMAZING Chapter Destiny. And Happy Birthday :D
ReplyDeleteAw, thank you, Kurtis! :D
Deletethis was odd.. I hope you're okay 'Lia. Pretty odd for you two huh?
ReplyDeleteDON'T KICK YOURSELF! I thought it was good :)
Please don't let happen what happened to her twin because then i'll slap you with a fish!
..But I know it won't happen because it's only chapter one of generation 3, so we're cool. Trolol XD
That 'Trolol' didn't even need to be there.. but imma leave it there for your enjoyment anyway :p
I have been reading by the way but you get chapters out so quickly I have to catch up then end up not commenting but know that every post you put out I definitely read :D
Oh and before I gooooooooooooooooooooooooo. Bit OTT there but oh well
HAPPY FREAKING BIRTHDAAY
Enjoy the celebrations, you sure deserve them!:D
Your red head freak
Odd doesn't completely cover it, but something along those lines.
DeleteOh, don't worry, she's not dying. I won't make my heiresses die, they're too special (and usually too pretty to even think of doing something like that).
Haha, you seem to have picked up some new trolling skills.
I'm on vacation (for another two weeks *fistpump*), and I'm sooooooooooo bored, seeing as my friends are away, and only get back within the next couple of days. So till then, I'm writing my heart out.
Thank you, Liana, especially for the post on my wall. It made me laugh. :D
Happy birthday!!!! Ooh, the guy is a ginger?? Omg. Awesome. I liked the chapter and am curious about the rest of the chapters. Oh, and I've been reading you baby challenge, and how did you get quads??? I've tried everything and can only get triplets.
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Also, now that I've thought about it, is this gonna be like avatar??? When she's sleeping in one world, she'll be awake in the other???
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Thanks!
DeleteWell, quadruplets isn't part of the game's programming, but I wanted it for my story anyhow. So, I made it that Destiny had twins, and the other two I spawned using Mastercontroller.
I thought about doing that, but decided against it. She'll mostly be dreaming, and wake up only once after some sort of disaster I can't really talk about yet. ^_^ The waking up part will be extremely interesting.
I can't wait!!!
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I'm just gonna cast my vote for Richard now. *.* And every time I listen to TITANIUM by David guetta, I think of Space and aliens.
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I LOVE THAT SONG! It's like, one of my favorites, ever. I'm gonna go listen to it now and see if I get the same image in my head.
DeleteHAPPY BIRTHDAY!! I already left a note on your wall on fb, but still...HAPPY FREAKING BIRTHDAY!! :D
ReplyDeleteThat was....interesting O.o like, really interesting. So she's dreaming, but not...I thought she actually got like launched into outer space and then caught by aliens, but....she didn't O.o Anyway, I hope she's alright....THIS REMINDS ME OF INCEPTION!! :D Like a dream within a dream O.o Didn't I relate something else to inception on your blog? I can't remember.... :/
~Izzi
THANKS IZZI! For the note and being an awesome friend... And for commenting, let's never forget that.
DeleteYou know what's the funny thing? I've never even WATCHED Inception, but I keep hearing about it. O_O Yeah, I'm not one for watching too many movies.
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Oooohhh....I am intrigued!
ReplyDeleteIt definitely is an...interesting idea, isn't it? Thanks, Cassie!
DeleteIt doesn't matter that it was short, I loved it anyways. Like Cassie said, I am intrigued. Aliens are so cool. I think this will be my favorite generation. :D
ReplyDelete~Dawn Turner
I think it might be my favorite generation as well...but I'm already excited for the next gen, which kinda dampens my feelings, but I'm trying to avoid it. ^_^
DeleteThanks for commenting, Dawn!
This is such a great start! I can't wait to meet the aliens more. Eep, this is so good, Destiny!
ReplyDelete~Calista Smith
Thanks, Molly! I'm working on creating even more aliens, so you'll get to see a great variety of them.
DeleteWow...
ReplyDeleteI've been gone for a while and I pull up the webpage and I see...Aliens???
At first I thought I was on the wrong page!
So yeah...thats a twist...
Awesome Awesome story that sounds really exciting! And do I see love triangle forming? Your banner sure looks like it.
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Oh, boy. That must've been a shock to see. O_o
DeleteThank you! And...it might happen...I'm still thinking about it. ^_^