"Why would you bring us here, then?" I frowned, looking over to gaze at her face. She didn't return my gaze, her sights fixed on the gate.
"Because it was what Copper wanted," she whispered, looking down at the ground. "He told me a few days ago that, when he had completed all of his tests on you, that we should...let you go. Send you back to where you came from. This is exactly what this gate will do, in a matter of seconds, of course. It's what you also wanted, remember?"
"Yes, in the beginning...but now, things are different," I tried to reason with her. "I have to help you escape, Cham. I have to help you survive."
"No, that was my duty to you, Lia." Her head whipped up, her eyes squinting at something in the distance. I could hear a faint sound, something that sounded like a helicopter. Perhaps some kind of spacecraft, meaning...the police. "They're onto us. You have to go."
"You're coming with me."
"I can't...," she smiled. "I need to remain here, to ensure that they don't know your destination. To keep you safe."
"Chambray! I will not have all of you sacrifice your lives for the sake of mine! You're too important to me!"
"As you are to me," she bowed her head in respect. I wanted to lash out and lift her head up to my gaze, telling her that she was insane. I was a nobody compared to her. "Though our time was brief, I've come to admire you, and the friendship we shared. You gave me hope, Lia. You taught us things we needed to learn. That is why you need to leave. To protect those things."
The noise created by the police force's vehicles were nearing our position, closing in on us. Chambray gave me a final nudge in the direction of the gate. "Do this final favor for me, okay? Please?" |
I'm so happy that she's finally awake. I just hope she remembers everything soon. :(
ReplyDeleteAnd oh my goodness... Copper. D:
That was so sweet of him to sacrifice himself so that at least Amelia would be saved.
Great post! I can't wait until the next one. :)
I'm still planning on how long she's gonna be without most of her memories, but it won't be too long.
DeletePhew. I'm glad it wasn't too clichéd for you! :D
Thanks for commenting!
Yay!! Now this reminds me of The Vow. Did you see that movie? I like it, except the end was HORRIBLE :P Anyways, I would be absolutely devastated if my future husband woke up and didn't even remember me. Omg. I can't even....think about it. I think I would literally be crushed.
ReplyDeleteEverything they ever had is gone....omg....
But yay! She woke up! :) I guess that's good...kinda....
GREAT CHAPTER!! <3333
~Izzi
Gosh, I feel like an idiot, but no. I really don't watch too many movies lately, too lazy to go to the DVD store and rent something.
DeleteI would too. It'd be like...a nightmare come true.
I'm still looking into the prospect of them being able to repair things, even in that strange situation... I don't like unhappy endings. It's just who I am. xD
Thanks for commenting, Izzi. ^_^
Oh my god. Chambray. Copper. are they dead!?
ReplyDeleteYour the BEST writer in the history of Legacy writers, and I am NOT JOKING about that. Your too great Destiny.
I am happy that Amelia has woken up but there are two things I am sad about.
Chambray and Copper. That also goodbye made me reaaaaly sad. I ....urm... like Copper now.
And Second, Amelia can't remember ANYONE!!!! That cannot be happening.
Poor Richard.
Anyway, Honestly the BEST chapter I have read so far. The BEST.
Well, they were never real in the first place. So technically, they're not dead...just not a part of Amelia's imagination anymore.
DeleteAw, you're just...awesome, honestly. That's the nicest thing someone has said to me in a long time. Alas, I wish it was true. I'm still in the process of bettering myself, and ultimately, my writing.
Shocking. O.o
Unfortunately, it's true.
Thanks for commenting, Kurtis. :D
Oh, poor Cham and copper. But.... she doesn't remember her family???? This is gonna be interesting....
ReplyDeleteHold on, school in the middle of summer??? Is it year-round??? Cause I still have a month and a half till I got back to school. Anyway, I hope you don't get a lot of homework.
-al
Best quote ever for leftys : Leftys have risen above the continuity of right handed people. ( yes, I'm left handed.). ; P
(I'm gonna reply to all the other comments soon, but I'm typing this just before school and wanted to answer the question)
DeleteIt's not summer where I am, it's winter. ^_^ I'm in South Africa, and we just finished a three week break from June to July.
I'm right handed, so I have to argue against that quote. :D
So...Christmas is in your summer vacation. That's cool. Rather have a nice hot Christmas than one full of rain and hail.
DeleteBut I must say, leftys use the right side of their brain more, so they are more artistic than rightys. Just sayin. ; P
-al
Don't take what I said above the wrong way. It's a joke.
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Trust me, a summer Christmas sucks. It's usually freaking hot where I am, and I can't go outside to enjoy it, because I have really sensitive skin and I could get cancer more easily than other people.
DeleteAnd right handed people use their left side of the brain more...the intellect and all of that crap, necessary when doing maths.
Okay, that's the end of that argument. I have a feeling things might become a lot more hostile... ^_^
Nah, I the nice, easy-going one in my family. ( and the only lefty, and in all those honors math and science classes ). : D. No hostilities!!! ; P
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I should point out that my best friend and another friend are both right handed, and they're in art classes and really good.
DeleteJust wanted to put that in because I forgot about it earlier.
I'm happy she's awake too! Ooh, now I'm not sure if I hate Copper as much as I did.
ReplyDeleteHer reunion into the real world was so well written. I loved how shocked she was but I'm glad that she at least understands that it's going to be hard to get used to this way of life.
I read an easy read book like this. The girl had amnesia and didn't remember her husband or the affair that she was having. By the end, she dumped her materialistic husband and got together with the guy she was having an affair with.
Anyway, good luck with school! And take your time. You're belted out plenty of posts these past weeks to take a good long break.
~Calista Smith
Hehe. I make all of my characters lovable sometime or another.
DeleteShucks, thanks so much for that. :) It took quite a while to get the everything how I wanted it in, but it worked out alright.
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She's not gonna have an affair. Definitely not. But she might drift away from Richard for a while.
Thanks, I'm gonna need it! And I only post so much because I'm determined and love writing for Amelia...it just feels great. :D
~♥~
Man this story just keeps getting better and better and I can't wait to see if Amelia gets her memory back.
ReplyDeleteI miss Chambray and Cooper already, I'm sad to see them go. :(
This one of the best legacies I ever read. I can't wait to see how you'll top this in generation 4.
~Dawn Turner
She will...someday...I'm still planning it out!
DeleteThey were really great characters to play with... I'm not sure if I will be bringing them back, but if people keep persisting, I might have to!
Thank you so much, Dawn. you have no idea how much that means to me. ;)
I hope she gets her memory back and...you know...lives happily ever after. :). At least I hope the generation ends better than Kay's did. I found it sort sad.
ReplyDeleteo_O I just realized Kay's legacy are all grandparent age...except for Kay and Aaron of course.
I so so so cannot wait for the next post!
Fawnester
If only every story had a happy ending...things would be too easy. O.o I'm definitely going to end it on a better note. Sad endings are just depressing.
DeleteYup, they are! Luckily, because of the never aging potion, they don't become gray haired and thin.
Thanks so much for commenting! :D