It's weird, but I didn't have a fun time writing this. It may have found its way into how the sentences were phrased, so be on the lookout for it.
But there is some good news...
Amelia is gonna be waking up in ze next chapter. I'm excited for that, which is why this chapter, let's call it a filler of sorts, is so crappy.
Now, an important part of this ending...
I'm in search of an editor that can help clean up with the small mistakes I make while writing - I am often too lazy to go back and read everything, so there are often a lot of things that need to be corrected.
So, if you're interested, just let me know. ^_^
I often make mistakes too so I wouldn't be an ideal editor. Anyway, for a second I had thought Shannon and Tyler was going to kill her but then I was like, 'Wait this is a legacy, how can the heir die!'
ReplyDeleteAnyway, I hope they get away from the 'Humans' and I REALLY cannot wait for the next chapter. AMELIA IS WAKING UP!
Enough of my ranting, This chapter was great, got me really curious.
I've seen legacies where the heiress has died...but in mine, that won't happen likely.
DeleteYup, she is. I was getting incredibly bored of the whole dream state, so... >.> Time for her to wake up!
Thank you for reading and taking the time to comment, Kurtis.
Oh and you are very welcome :)
DeleteAwesome!! I cant wait for Amelia to wake up! the next chapter is going to be awesome!
ReplyDeleteI know how you feel... Im in the processes of writing a filler chapter too :p
you are awesome!
I hope it will live up to your expectations. ^_^
DeleteThey're really hard, aren't they? Well, that's how it feels to me. I feel as if I'm writing a load of crap.
Aw, thank you...you're too kind. *.*
Hm... I think I may be an ideal editor cause all I do is read and play sims, but I don't have an email or anything like that. But....l can't wait for Amelia to wake up!!!
ReplyDelete-al
You should consider making an account for such purposes!
DeleteThanks for commenting. :)
Man... Amelia has dreamed up some crazy people. O.o
ReplyDeleteMakes for an awesome story though.
I can't wait for her to wake up now! :D
I would be willing to edit for you. I'm thinking of becoming a book editor anyways, so this could be good practice.
She sure has a...unique imagination. Some would say she herself is crazy. >.>
DeleteIt sure does! I love playing around with such characters.
We should talk more on Facebook about that... I would love to have you aboard as editor. :D
Uh oh. Well there is typical Charlotte. Even while she helps you, she gets you in a heap of trouble.
ReplyDeleteGreat chapter. I am super excited for her awakening. Except for that Chambrey and Copper will dissapear. I really want to know what happens next!
Fawnester
Yeah. Amelia created a very very accurate representation of her sister. :D
DeleteThe only sad part of it all. I wish I could keep them around in some way, like ghosts in Amelia's conscience, but I already have something else planned like that, so it won't work.
Are you going to show them escaping in the next chapter or is she going to just wake up?
ReplyDeleteFawnester
Yes, I am. I won't be showing too much of an attack (special effects in the game don't really offer too much on that subject), but a little more of Amelia's escape and transition back to the real world.
DeleteThank you for commenting!
Ooooh omg!! Can I please be an editor? I would absolutely LOVE that. I can spell better than my dad, and I always get an A in english :D lolz. Anyway, sorry I'm like, bragging, but I just want you to know that I would love to be an editor!! :DDDDD
ReplyDeleteOnto the chapter, EXCITING STUFF. NEXT CHAPTER PLEASE. NOW. RIGHT NOW. :) jkay. Take as long as you want, so it's perfect :D
~Izzi
I've messaged you concerning that topic. You'll have to make a Blogspot account, though... >.> Not sure if that would be a problem.
DeleteThat's...freaky. O_o being able to spell better than your father. 'Course, I can spell (and pronounce) words better than my sister, and she actually wants to become an English teacher... Her logic is flawed. -_-
I'M WORKING ON IT RIGHT NOW. If only I can tear myself away from listening to Ellie Goulding songs... Thanks for commenting, Izzi!
Ooh, I'd love to be an editor... but so many other people are already asking to be one. Goodness, I was a little late. Oh well, whatever floats your boat.
ReplyDeleteHmmm, I finally caught up and I can't stress this enough, I love how deep your story line is. I mean, you actually go in depth with the characters' personalities and everything. After reading that last three chapters, I am very excited for Amelia to wake up. Her kids are so old, she needs to wake up!
And poor Ric. I feel so bad for him. Also, the whole hallucination with Charlotte thing is honestly creeping me out. I'm glad she explained that whole dream thing to Amelia but it would be creepy if someone just appeared and started talking to me. Especially if that someone was supposed to be dead.
Can't wait for the next post! I'm excited to see what her reaction to entering real life is going to be like.
~Calista Smith
Messaged you 'bout that. :D it's never too late for you, amico. ^_^
DeleteThat's so...you're too kind, Molly. :D
I would too...anyone would! Well, any sane human being, that is.
Thank you, Molly!
~♥~